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Post by SuperSmashKart on Sept 5, 2010 19:27:47 GMT -6
a little better
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Post by Desslok on Sept 5, 2010 22:49:29 GMT -6
BWAHAHAHA, I laughed so hard when you said "Scooby Doo and the Spooky Swamp." Marked improvement this week, Kart. The preview pics during the Kirby segment were an especially nice change up. Your catch phrase at the beginning of each show is good, but you really need something at the end too. A short preview of next week's show, a sign off or something because it jumps to the credits a bit too abruptly. Otherwise, the show's moving in the right direction.
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Post by SuperSmashKart on Sept 5, 2010 22:53:31 GMT -6
What about the ending catch phrase as "This is the Wiikend News Powering down."
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Post by Desslok on Sept 6, 2010 13:56:38 GMT -6
Meh, not exactly my cup of tea. Maybe something like: "And that wraps up this week's Wii news. For my colleagues Mr. Emote and Mr. Forecast, this is Mr. Mii reminding you that if your weekly Wii news didn't come from Wiikend, it must be pretty weak!" And of course you can always change that up for special occasions or special episodes that may come along. AND NOW the moment we've all been waiting for, the unveiling of one of the new Wiikend News co-stars... the irreverant Mr. FORECAST! Attachments:
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Post by SuperSmashKart on Sept 6, 2010 14:46:06 GMT -6
can you make him happy?
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Post by Desslok on Sept 6, 2010 16:39:38 GMT -6
Oh, trust me, he's VERY happy. Just don't poke fun at his small height.
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Post by Vidgameplayer007 on Sept 9, 2010 6:19:10 GMT -6
now tht newscast was ALOT better
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Post by Desslok on Sept 9, 2010 14:20:03 GMT -6
The Wiikend News. You could get your Wii news elsewhere, but why would you want to? Attachments:
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Post by SuperSmashKart on Sept 9, 2010 15:35:17 GMT -6
Could you make the wiikend logo the same color as the wii logo? But that is great
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Post by Desslok on Sept 9, 2010 15:43:24 GMT -6
Ah, you don't like the brown? I'll see what I can do. Feel free to use any of this promo stuff on your blog or elsewhere.
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Post by SuperSmashKart on Sept 9, 2010 15:47:44 GMT -6
I think I will use it as the avatar
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Post by denny on Sept 10, 2010 23:35:29 GMT -6
This is Denny approved O__o. Meep.
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Post by SuperSmashKart on Sept 11, 2010 8:16:23 GMT -6
sorry desslok if this is too much trouble but could you make the color of the logo red?
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Post by SuperSmashKart on Sept 12, 2010 19:07:29 GMT -6
here it is
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Post by Desslok on Sept 12, 2010 20:26:28 GMT -6
Another improvement, Kart, excellent! This week's constructive criticism: Set Backgrounds: Try diversifying the backgrounds for each of the three sets so they seem like they're in different parts of the studio. Happy Cloud should probably only be part of Mr. Mii's broadcast area for example. Wiikly Forecast: Aside from Mr. Forecast's slightly uneven performance (that will improve with time ), I think his mouth was completely eratic, lol. Mr. Mii and Emote's mouth's seem to follow along the words pretty well, Mr. Forecast seems to be having some difficulty. Also, I think it would be better to show pics of the game boxes as he announces them rather than the list, then folks'll know what to look for when they go shopping. The GameFaqs reference could be put down in the corner or better yet, saved for the credits. Emote's Review's: Excellent new segment, and very in depth. CTK did wonders with his assessment. Looking forward to more. I'll be PMing you soon with some more ideas, keep up the good work!
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